I'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team, and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
Wow, your Lorde poster looks really cool, I love the bright, pretty colours you've used and the big rainbow font for her name. Your facts are really good and specific, like being specific about where she was born, great job!
I like the image you chose of her as well as how you've placed it, just remember to attribute any images you use from the internet by writing or hyperlinking to where you found it for maximum points next week.
I'm really looking forward to seeing more awesome work like this from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Matai,
ReplyDeleteI'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team, and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
Wow, your Lorde poster looks really cool, I love the bright, pretty colours you've used and the big rainbow font for her name. Your facts are really good and specific, like being specific about where she was born, great job!
I like the image you chose of her as well as how you've placed it, just remember to attribute any images you use from the internet by writing or hyperlinking to where you found it for maximum points next week.
I'm really looking forward to seeing more awesome work like this from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Daniel