Fantastic learning, Matai! It is great to see how you have used your prior knowledge and interest about mussels and mussel farming into your writing. You have included some great facts. How could you persuade someone that their should or shouldn't be mussel farms? Miss G :)
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Fantastic learning, Matai! It is great to see how you have used your prior knowledge and interest about mussels and mussel farming into your writing. You have included some great facts. How could you persuade someone that their should or shouldn't be mussel farms?
ReplyDeleteMiss G :)